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Warning: Crack-ish :3


"SEMPAI!!!" Someone screamed. Normally, everyone would assume it was Tobi, but the new recruit... well, let's say that it could've been her. Someone glomped Deidara and started messing with his hair.
"[Y/N] GET OFF ME!" Deidara bellowed, obviously freaking out. You just giggled and started burying your face in his hair.
"It's so silky~" You sang, rubbing your cheek against his blonde locks.
"MY HAIR, UN! MY BEAUTIFUL ARTISTIC HAIR!" Deidara screamed. "SOMEONE GET HER OFF!" Kisame sighed and peeled you off, instantly causing you to glomp him instead. Poor soul, he didn't know what was coming.
"SUSHI-KUN!" You attacked him with a huge glomp and he yelped, trying to get you off now. But your hug was like some sort of superhuman one - he just couldn't get you off.
"ALRIGHT, TOBI!" Deidara yelled. "YOU LET [Y/N]-CHAN NEAR THE SUGAR AGAIN, DIDN'T YOU?!" Tobi giggled and skipped out.
"I won't tell you! But Tobi's a good boy, so I probably didn't~" He sang. After Kisame had successfully peeled you off, you caught a glance of Itachi sipping his coffee.
"WEASEL-KUN! GIVE ME A-" Itachi glared at you. Even without his Sharingan, you paused. You really didn't want to die yet. "Uh... never mind..." You said, edging a little away. "TOBI! NO ONE LOVES ME!! GIVE ME A FREE HUG NOW!"  You shouted. Both you and Tobi glomped each other, while everyone who happened to be there (Except Itachi, who was concentrating on drinking his coffee) just plain stared. By the way, Hidan had walked in at some point.
"Why does that look just f****** wrong?" He said, staring at you dramatically crying and hugging Tobi extremely hard, while he was returning the *Cough Cough* warm gesture.
"Because you're just perverted." Itachi replied, still drinking the coffee.
"Why you little f-"
"OH LOOK! HIDAN-KUN!! I LOVE YOU!!!" You yelled. "I'M SURE TOBI LOVES YOU TOO!!"
"Er... Tobi's scared of Hidan-Sempai... you should stay awa-" Too late. Hidan was utterly glomped.
"HOLY JASHIN GET THIS F***** OFF ME!!" He screamed, flailing. Kisame shook his head sadly, but he was laughing.
"I'm not going to help him. I don't want that to happen again. Uh... Itachi-San? A little help here?"
"[Y/n], get off of Hidan."
"FINE." You pouted. "Tobi, let's go somewhere else. I wanna go do something fun." You said, dragging Tobi to your bedroom. When the door locked, Hidan, again, came in with a perverted comment. Well, almost.
"... Is it just me, or is [Y/n] gonna get-"
"It's just you." Itachi cut him off.

And guess what? Itachi was still drinking his coffee. Jeez, how big is his coffee mug?


"TOBI LET'S PLAY TRUTH OR DARE!!" You squealed, attacking him with another hug.
"Okay! You first!!"
"No, you first!" You stuck your tongue out childishly
"But it's ladies first, and Tobi's a good boy." Tobi retorted.
"But I'm not a lady!"
"... FINE. I choose... uh..." Now Tobi was having a hard time, because he didn't want to be dared to steal Deidara-Sempai's underwear again. It wasn't really fun... because poor Tobi had found out that Deidara didn't wear any. "... DARE!!" He yelled. He had obviously not learned from his previous experiences.
"Huh..." You put on a thinking pose. "I... I dare you to... I DARE YOU TO-"

~~Meanwhile, outside~~

Deidara had decided to check up on Tobi and [Y/n], just because they can get pretty wild when [Y/n] was on a sugar high. Of course, not sexually. Seriously people, stop thinking that.
"Hey, Tobi, un, are you guys-"
"ERMAGAWD TOBI, HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS!? GO FASTER, FASTER~" Deidara froze, face pale. Wait... that didn't sound right... Deidara shook his head.
"Hey, [Y/n], what are you guys-"
"I'M... TRYING..." Deidara heard Tobi pant. Oh. Dear. C4. He burst in the room.
"TOBI AND [Y/N], YOU ARE BOTH TOO YOUNG TO HAVE SEX!" He screamed, but his face displayed utter confusion at the scene before him. First of all, they still had their clothes, and second of all, Tobi was holding a milkshake in his hands, as well as [Y/n], and empty cups were strewn across the room. "Uh... never mind, un." He said, and quickly ran out the door. He was met by a smirking Hidan.
"It's hard not to take them pervertedly. Am I f****** right?"
"Yes, un."

~~Meanwhile, inside~~
"I can't believe it... you drank 5 milkshakes in less than 3 minutes..." You said, wide eyed. "SO COOL!"
"So, your turn~" Tobi said.
"Truth."
"Huh. So [Y/n]-chan is taking the safe way?"
"YAHP."
"So... does [Y/n]-chan have a crush on anyone in the Akatsuki?"
"Uh... well... uh..." Your face turned redder than a tomato. Now, this was a problem. At first, you didn't have a crush, because you deemed most of them to be grumpy ass-hats, but after a while, you met a certain person with an orange mask...
"So who does [Y/n]-chan like?" Tobi said, scooting closer to you.
"Uh... promise not to tell anyone, grasshopper?" You asked.
"Of course, ladybug." You didn't tell him what grasshopper was supposed to mean.
"I like... the guy... that... has... black hair."
"Itachi-Sempai?"
"The other one."
"I don't think there's anyone else with black hair." Tobi said, putting his hand on his chin. You sighed, and started ruffling his hair.
"What colour is your hair?"
"Black, but- oh." Tobi got it now. "[Y/n]-chan like Tobi?"
"DUH, DERPY. Now, truth or-"
"Tobi likes [Y/n]-chan, too."
"ANYWAYS, TRUTH OR- Wait. Say that again."
"Tobi likes [Y/n]-chan, too." You pressed your face up to his mask, staring him in his eye.
"Reeaaaalllllyyyyy?"
"Really."
......
...............
..........................
"Derp." You said, blushing. "So d'you think we should-" You didn't get to complete that sentence. "MMMFFFff..." Tobi had already kissed you. His mask was twisted, covering his eyes, but his mouth was already latched upon yours. Your blush turned even deeper when you returned the kiss, but you grinned. Then Tobi parted and put on his mask properly, and skipped out. You glanced at the door in a little bit of a haze, unsure whether that was just a genjutsu of sorts. Then you jumped up on your bed and did a little victory dance.
"JUST AS PLANNED!!" You laughed, even though you knew you were lying. But then Tobi came back in and whispered in your ear in a different voice. It wasn't cute or boyish. Damn, it was manly and sexy. Made you want to hit that~
"My room, 9:00. Don't be late." He skipped back out and you turned red again.


~9:00pm~

"Tobi, what did you- TOBI STOP!! THAT'S MY SHIRT-"

......


"Mmm~"
I must say that I was inspired by a few fan fictions :D I don't have the link to them, sorry. If someone has them, please post it in the comments below.

Okay, this is dedicated to ~skeamstroke-chan because she wouldn't stop bothering me about it, ha ha~

I'm not sure whether this needs a Mature Content warning....

:iconitachiuchihaplz:: You should check with a friend.
Me: ... Still drinking that coffee?
:iconitachiuchihaplz:: Yes.

:iconcoffeeplz:

:icondeidaraplz:: ... I don't go commando, un.
Me: Oh come on, yes you do~

You (c) Yourself
The others (c) Masashi Kishimoto
Coffee (c) Whoever made it.
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:iconhollyravenwood:
HollyRavenWood Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Student Writer
Awe Tobi Icon Tobi Egg 
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member
i would hit that~ come on who wouldnt?
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Valetarya Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist
OMG, I just can't stop laughing :'DD Kawaii Tobi Icon/Avatar Free To Use! Glomp! I wanna glomp you, because this story is AWESOME!!!!Love 
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sweetgeekXD Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Itachi's cup is the cup of endless coffee yet its always unsweetened XD
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CarmenBiat Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  New member Student Artist
LOL 

"Toby's a good boy" 
XD
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Starrypelt2Whitestar Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nyeheheheheheh... *transforms into Akatsuki OC called Rinnae but friend with Kakashi* (OKie let's pretend the [Y/n] is someone called um... Shanari (WUUUT IT'S A NAME I CAME UP WITH IN 3 SECONDS and back to roleplay)
Rinnae: Hmm where's Tobi need to talk to him... *knocks on Itachi's door*
Itachi: Wut.
Rinnae: Where's Tobi  and Shanari can you help please. Oh wait ya just help anyway :T
Itachi: *finishes coffee* Okay so... *activates Sharingan*
Rinnae: Heh. *activates her stolen Sharingan and scans Hideout*
Itachi: I see Konan paper folding... Pein is writing a new mission or something....
Rinnae: Kakuzu counting money as always... Hidan doing a ritual...... Uh... Kisame is talking to Deidara... Zetsu is walking around again... You are here.... And.. Holy...
Itachi: What the hell... is going on in there.....
Rinnae: *teleports all over the place to tell all the members to meet outside Tobi's room*
Everyone besides Rinnae and Itachi: What? What's happening in there with Shanari and Tobi??
Rinnae: *hands strange eye drops that see through stuff and they all put it on*
Everyone/ not Rinnae: (Hidan) HOLY JASHIN! (Kakuzu) Where's my money.. oh wait.. WAIT WUT?! (Konan) *uses paper to cover her eyes* (Pein) *is already on ground* (Kisame) *uses his sword to cover his eyes* (Deidara) I KNEW it. KNEW IT! *creates a bird of clay and flies off* (Zetsu) (ol.o) *no response cept the face* (Itachi) *sighs and walks away*
Rinnae: *busts down the door and every other Akatsuki member is up seeing wut Tobi's face is liek*
Shanari: TOBI OFF OFF OFF OFF OFF OFF TOBI OFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!!
Tobi: God dangit... *transports to Kamui with Shanari before anything happens*
Rinnae: ):T Aw come on they no fun.
TO BE CONTINUED!!



I wuv making stories so much (B3
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ThePokemonz Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You HAVE to create a sequel please please please ! (ノ゚0゚)ノ~
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Badkitty36 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn you have to create a sequel! That was getting intense! 
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Hee hee~ Nawwwwww I won't~ Leave it to your imaginations :D
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Badkitty36 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWW man!
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shenza-monchenso Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
better not to, i get pretty vivid.....
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Mimi-Chanchu Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hxjdjidkabsbdjrmdkfochcbfiklsjnzirhbcxjnecjekncid
Yassssssss<3
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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AkitoKiki Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
poor mr. sushi XD. 
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Ah, I bet Kisame secretly loves them. Deep down. Deep deep deep down. Very deep down...



under the seaaaaaa~
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GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
This comment made my day xD
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XxWhiskdreamxX Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
XDDDDDDD
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AkitoKiki Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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DeidaraHidanTobi Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Photographer
Awesome and amazing and funny as well.
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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DeidaraHidanTobi Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student Photographer
Your welcome
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JINX991 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ZHE GLOMPS *glomps author-chan for making such a cute story* SO KAWAII I CONGRATULATE YOU~ 
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
THANKSSS~
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JINX991 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np
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BlondeFromHell Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I thought thks was a just going to be a little crackish! But dear God! That was crazy! I felt hyper just reading it! Well done!
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Ha ha, thankss!!!!!
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:iconblondefromhell:
BlondeFromHell Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
:XD:
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sweetsassycat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
sequel pleaseeeee Bunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4]
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol, sorry, no, it was just meant to be a weird little... one shot... thang. :D
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Kittygirl144 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Dayum note to self never eat sugar again!
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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galewings Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...Wait a sec.
Woah
WOAHH
WOAHHHH
OH GAWDDD
TOBI STAHP
STAHPPP
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Ha ha!
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yugiohlover109 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This right here is the definition of me on sugar 
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yugiohlover109 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol so true XD
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Dun dun dunnn!! If we dropped 100kg of sugar on reader-chan, APOCALYPSE NEARS!!
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TerracottaWarrior092 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
W...t...f....I want to glomp everyone too TT^TT
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student General Artist
GLOMPIN' TIMEE~
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TerracottaWarrior092 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Aww yeah B)
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TerracottaWarrior092 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Aww yeah B)
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madarasgenderbend Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Artist
was it weird......THAT IM DRINKING COFFEE RIGHT NOW! AND ITACHI IS MY SECOND FAVORITE CHARACTER AFTER TOBI?!?! * IS HAVING AWKWARD COFFEE SPAZIMZ*
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student General Artist
*LE GASP!* OHMERGAWD!!! COFFEE DOES LINK PEOPLE THROUGH WORLDS AND DIMENSIONS!
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madarasgenderbend Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student Artist
*gasps* IT DOSE! *still drinking coffie* ITACHI WHAT AM I THINKING?!
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SilverReins Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
There should be sorry little thing where everyone's just like 0_0, after hearing them and Hidan's just like, "I fucking told ya."
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol, that's actually a really good idea XD
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FierceDeityGirl Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Here^^^^^^^^^^ Your comment is the.... secret.... extended ending. XD
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YuinaPP Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student General Artist
DSFKNSDFNSDF Racing Girl Emoji (Nose Bleed) [V3] Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Spaz attack Omg so cute 
faint Boa Hancock (Faints) [V2] Marluxia Faint faint 

d-d-d-did you put crack in with the story? ;u;
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TifaLockhart23 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Yeah me too.....I like the Marluxia one XD
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:iconevetyran:
evetyran Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student General Artist
I love the selection of emoticons you've got there~!! 
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YuinaPP Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you! XD
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